Monster

Now, the title isn't exactly what I want it to be. But I couldn't really think of anything else. Can someone help me to make one after reading the poem/song?

Now there's more of them.
I do not trust them,
But they trusted me.

*Chorus*
It's a monster.
It destroys everything.
My heart is breaking.
Why?
What's going on here
And what do I feel?
It's a secret
But I'm afraid to trust it.

The outcome:
Hell's in my bedroom.
I do not believe it.
I don't believe in you.

How come only I
Can see them, no one else?
I can't handle this
Anymore.

Where do they come from?
What does it want?

*Chorus*
It's my monster.
It destroys everything.
My heart is breaking.
Why?
What's going on here?
And what do I feel?
It's a secret.
But I'm afraid to trust it.

I'm not sure
Of anything anymore.
What are these monsters?
Are they mine or someone elses?
The monster's scraping
On my window
And my ears are now breaking.

I'm sorry, little monster.
Did I hurt you sometime before?
But it's obvious now.
That you're trying to kill me.

No comments?

I think 'Monster' fits it. iIf youdont think so then alrighty then. =]

I think it fits.

Could people actually give me some helpful criticism and not just LOOK at it please? I'd like to work on it a little bit.

i think its a good poem. good job.