comfortable.

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[Broken Pretty]
Idiot
[Broken Pretty]
Age: 36
Gender: Female
Posts: 572
December 25th, 2006 at 07:52am
an old one i found, sorry if it is a dud or whatever.

eyeliner,
sleeves,
and maybe correct hair,
feeling right with a pen in my hand.

the paper becomes graffitied with words of
my mind eventually,
not making enough sense
explains how im thinking.

funny this feeling,
it's always how i feel
without you by my side.
josh_oliday23
Geek
josh_oliday23
Age: 35
Gender: Male
Posts: 267
December 25th, 2006 at 02:06pm
Sorry I didn't like it. It just felt like a bunch of words just thrown together. I mean i read it twice and i just don't get it. Oh and the limit is only 3 poems a day. next time read before posting please. merry christmas thoughSmile
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