cotton wool kid.

cotton wool kid,
i admit it, i am.
you dont need to force me
to be something i am
no, i am not mummy or daddy's little girl
im legal now
im not stepping back into line
i want to get ouit and see the world

do i need your permisson?
im not thinking so.
you took my attention that i needed
so i'll never take your seriously.

It was pretty good, but it seemed a tad unfinished to me. Or it ended rather abruptly. Anyways, might wanna check the spelling. Like "permission" and "out."

That's what spell check is for. ^_~

But, still not such a bad job.