Magazine Sickness.
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  | December 26th, 2006 at 09:26am Hokay so theres prob some spelling mistakes.
I wrote it and havent edited it yet properly.
Just read and excuse the mistakes.
The kids of my generation,
had succumb to a terrible subculture.
Its addictive mannerisms and
habits adopted in seconds, by kids just trying to be 'cool'.
Parents and guardians tried to understand why
their sons and daughters had swapped roles.
They lay awake at night questioning the attraction to black; to gloomy lyrics; to the same sex.
It was their fault.
They failed their jobs as pillars of love and stability as soon as they relenquished their positions; to television and the glitz of all that opens her legs.
They had lost their sons and daughters a long time ago.
Everytime they were pushed around; pushed away; or pushed down, only distanced those here to protect; from those here to clean up the mess.
These kids are abused, misused and unamused; the sad thing is noone seems to care. |
sugar city urchin.
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Age: 34
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Posts: 209 | December 26th, 2006 at 09:30am woot!
i like this a lot kat. good emotion.
and i love your choice of words in it! lol. thats all i seem to have been saying.
but no, really is good.
last line makes me think of unwritten law song...mm.... |
Magazine Sickness.
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| December 26th, 2006 at 09:36am thankyah. |
Babi Kid Rachy
King For A Couple Of Days
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Posts: 4512 | December 26th, 2006 at 10:16am I love it.
Good job! <3
x |
Magazine Sickness.
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Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 443
| December 26th, 2006 at 10:17am thankyuu |
