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Milk King For A Couple Of Days Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 3741	December 28th, 2006 at 01:50am Beware Secret kisses trace your lies Midnight wounds around your eyes Fallen and broken we shall prevail Our love has spoken, we will not fail Energize, the emptiness we feel Critisize, it makes me real And in the darkness we can't find A healthy concience, a state of mind And our bond was broken I guess you have spoken But inside, we are still one Because, my love, I am not done Free me from you Love we are not through You are the one that lights my fire You are my hearts secret desire I want to feel you in my reach Lovers, this is not how we teach Hold each other close with care Love doesn't last though, beware
FrankFuckingIero Jackass Age: 35 Gender: Female Posts: 1015	December 28th, 2006 at 01:53am I think it's pertiful
Milk King For A Couple Of Days Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 3741	December 28th, 2006 at 08:08pm Teenager.: I think it's pertiful Thank you! I think if I sing it, it will sound like Evanescence...
The Kill Falling In Love With The Board Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 8449	December 28th, 2006 at 09:01pm Oh my god, it's absolutely beautiful I can't even pick out a favourite line... they're all great. Wow.
Toxic Teeth Idiot Age: 30 Gender: Female Posts: 645	December 28th, 2006 at 09:13pm I can so picture Evanescence doing something like this, and i can almost hear Amy Lee's voice Its really great i love the first part.
Toxic Narcotic King For A Couple Of Days Age: 103 Gender: Female Posts: 3750	December 28th, 2006 at 09:21pm aw, that brought tears to my eyes!!! I loved it!!!
Sid and Nancy Geek Age: 31 Gender: Female Posts: 136	December 28th, 2006 at 09:22pm it does sound like an evanescence song! veryeh good! i too heard Amy Lee..
Garrett Hanlund This Board Is My Home Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 30801	December 29th, 2006 at 12:27am Very very good. Amazing. I can't pick a favorite stanza or line or anything. It's just good.
Milk King For A Couple Of Days Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 3741	December 29th, 2006 at 09:18pm Thank you all very much. I swear, you really made my day.
Martian Girl Banned Age: 37 Gender: Female Posts: 33037	December 30th, 2006 at 08:20pm I really like it. I can't even pick out my favorite part, it's just all......

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