Abnormality

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PaNcAkEs
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PaNcAkEs
Age: 33
Gender: Female
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January 1st, 2007 at 06:54pm
the darling smiles facing you
disgusting loyalties
formalaties at the dinner table
the water is boiling over

people being secrecive
the lies are overwhelming
and finaly the worlds gonna crack
the kids'll rebel forever.

bree from the tv show
is a perfect example
of seeming none fed up
with not saying out what you mean.

like the edge of abnormality
try to explain what normal means
most things are so mediocre
making our heads spin around.
Peter Petrelli
King For A Couple Of Days
Peter Petrelli
Age: 35
Gender: Female
Posts: 4161
January 2nd, 2007 at 06:41am
'bree from the tv show
is a perfect example
of seeming none fed up
with not saying out what you mean'

I understood what you meant, but refering to media took away some of the poem's validity.

But...
'the darling smiles facing you
disgusting loyalties
formalaties at the dinner table
the water is boiling over'
^That was pretty awesome. I loved this stanza.

And I also really liked 'try to explain what normal means', I thought the idea was great.

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