had to touch feelings

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nirvana
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
nirvana
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 74
January 7th, 2007 at 12:30pm
Yet another song or something. It's not that good as the other 2 I posted, but it's still mine and I quite like it.

had to touch feelings
Love is a whore
the whore in her bed
he is a whore
but she doesn't care
'cause he's the whore in her bed

He's so sick of all excuses
his life's a bore in bloom
And she's a damn good accuser
and she has a cold heart and a cold room

She just doesn't give a fuck
until he keeps warm the shed
no hard feeling, no easy luck
he still wanders for some who cares

he loves to be loved
she likes to get laid
she considers him a whore
he considers getting paid

anyone, anywhere, anyhow
she doesn't have appeals
he feels like he's turned down
he likes it when it's real
love.
King For A Couple Of Days
love.
Age: -
Gender: Female
Posts: 2844
January 7th, 2007 at 02:36pm
Love is a whore
the whore in her bed
he is a whore
but she doesn't care
'cause he's the whore in her bed

...(my opinion) whore is being used to much in this one paragraph.

He's so sick of all excuses
his life's a bore in bloom
And she's a damn good accuser
and she has a cold heart and a cold room
^this. AMAZING.
good job!
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