Rotten
Idiot
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 671
 | January 7th, 2007 at 04:13pm This is just about being yourself and having pride in who you are. Hope you like it.
I know why you're giving up
But I can't convince you at all
You're the only one who can stop you
From taking the fatal fall
Wake up suddenly and remember
What you've got to live for
And now that you know what you're worth
You're worth more than before
You wandered the streets so carelessly
Not even knowing your own name
Now you've awoken for the first time
Now you'll never feel that old pain
(chorus)
Don't forget that you belong
And don't push yourself into the background
Have some pride and take what's yours
When things are down, stand your ground
When they're firing cruel words at you
And you don't think you should go on
Have some pride and take what's yours
When things are down, stand your ground
You've got all you need inside your head
No matter what you've been told
And in this new life you're in control
So live before you're too old
And so what if you've been put down?
If they don't like you, you're doing well
Make everything last as long as you can
So you'll have some stories to tell
Even if you have to fight
For everything you get
It's never supposed to be easy
As long as you never regret
(chorus) |
PhotoBoy.
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
Age: 35
Gender: Female
Posts: 24 | January 9th, 2007 at 01:10pm Wow.
I really liked that.
It had a lot of feeling in it, a lot of meaning.
With a catchy guitar riff, that could be a great song.
The genral idea for this song was a good one, but it's just a tiny bit over-rated.
Still, you kinda put a fresh coat of paint on it + livened it up a bit.
Had a good, steady rhythem.
I liked this:
'And so what if you've been put down?
If they don't like you, you're doing well
Make everything last as long as you can
So you'll have some stories to tell'
Had some good rhymes, + overall you verses worked well together.
Good job. :] |
Rotten
Idiot
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 671
| January 9th, 2007 at 04:31pm Thanks very much! I'm very glad you like it, especially because I banged it out in 5 minutes. Thanks very much for reading! |
davey jones.
Falling In Love With The Board
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 7018
 | January 9th, 2007 at 08:49pm For very personal reasons, I found that immensley amazing.
I mean it really means something to me.
The message is a good one and different from others. I would point out specifics, but there's too many.  It's got great rhyme and flow. |
Rotten
Idiot
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 671
| January 10th, 2007 at 05:52pm Thanks very much, A Melancholy Autumn. I'm really glad you can relate, 'cause I was hoping people would understand what I was trying to get at. Cheers for reading! |
