Stay Away. [Uber creative, I know.]
| Author | Message |
|---|---|
| The Kill Falling In Love With The Board  Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 8449  | This isn't a poem. It's... song lyrics.  I’ve said it many times before, And I’ll say it again. I don’t need your pity, And I don’t want your “respect”. Save your apologies, They’ll fall on deaf ears. I’m sick of your shit, Done housing these fears. Just stay away from me. Stay away… Just stay away from me. Just stay the fuck away! I’m feeling better these days, Without your voice in my mind. Don’t ruin it for me, The result won’t be kind. My world is finally healing, And my body too. Don’t dare taint my name, When telling untruths. Just stay away from me. Stay away… Just stay away from me. Just stay the fuck away! I’ve cleansed myself of your lies, Your poisonous words. Your suspicious eyes, And I’m free from your curse. Your lips, smile, With that hideous twist. Every inch of you forgotten, You no longer exist. Just stay away from me. Stay away… Just stay away from me. Just stay the fuck away! *** I know most of you are not going to like the Chorus, but my only excuse is I was pissed when I wrote this and it's all I could think of  I'm open to any suggestions for it XD |
| Garrett Hanlund This Board Is My Home  Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 30801  | I love it! I didn't really like the chorus bit, but that's just me. It'd make a great song, though. Keep it up! |
| The Kill Falling In Love With The Board Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 8449 | Veritas: Yeah, I've already got the guitar written out for it and together it sounds pretty sweet Thanks |
| The Kill Falling In Love With The Board Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 8449 | No one else wants to tell me what they think?  |
| My Chemical Romance! Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie  Age: - Gender: Male Posts: 53 | |
| The Kill Falling In Love With The Board Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 8449 | Saint.: Thanks |
| Hello, My Name Is Asshole Jackass  Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 1530 |  Sorry 'bout not noticing it. But yes, I agree with the posts above. It's really well written and.. rhymes nicely and not too much. Not like those Dr. Seuss rhymes that kind of get annoying.  On the other hand, the chorus does seem a bit repetitive, but since it's a song, it doesn't matter. You don't see anyone complaining about Hilary Duff's song where the only lyrics are "to the beat of my heeaEaaARaartrt." So, good job, Dizzle. I'd love to hear you sing it.  Hm? Hmmmm? XD |
| The Kill Falling In Love With The Board Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 8449 | Hello, My Name Is Asshole: *ignores Hilary Duff comment* XDXD Thank ya ^__^ I might let you hear it... eventually... some day... |
| Hipster. Falling In Love With The Board  Age: 35 Gender: Female Posts: 6700 | |
| The Kill Falling In Love With The Board Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 8449 | SEx<3'sYsD&TCd!!1!:  [sings]THANKYOOOO. I'MGLADYOULIKEEEEETT!![/singing] |
| Hello, My Name Is Asshole Jackass Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 1530 | Slash? Hell yes!(YSD): *was not compairing you to Hilary Duff, btw* O__O |
| The Kill Falling In Love With The Board Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 8449 | Hello, My Name Is Asshole: You better not have been  |
| Hello, My Name Is Asshole Jackass Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 1530 | XD I wasn't. See, there's a bit of a difference. You = pwnage. Hilary Duff = Stupid dumb ugly.  |
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