I Can't Stop Dancing
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josh_oliday23 Geek ![]() Age: 35 Gender: Male Posts: 267 | This is just a small poem I wrote. Sorry if you don't like the repetition in the end but it is just how I decided to do it. -------------------------------------------------------------------- My feet are moving to the rhythm again, Yet no one's beating on the drum It speeds on faster through the air. But I can't stop the rhythm now....... Taking back all the things I've said, won't get this beat out of my head. Tears falling... stars calling... I can't stop what I've become. All I can do now is run... I can't stop dancing! I'm...mo...ving...toward the light. I can't stop dancing! I...don't...think...that this is right. My feet are moving to a different drum. It won't stop even though I beg. In my mind I stand my ground. But here in life my feet move on. Punishment is so cruel for me. Now I just wish that I was free. No ending... Fate pending... Keep dancing... Entrancing... All I can ask myself is why? My spirit breaks down as I cry. I can't stop dancing! There...is...no...end in sight. I can't stop dancing! I...won't...leave...without a fight. I can't stop dancing!!! (There...is...no...end in sight.) I can't stop dancing!!! (I'm...mo...ving...toward the light.) I can't stop dancing!!! I can't stop dancing!!! I can't stop dancing!!! The...drum...is...done for the night........ |
DudeO King For A Couple Of Days ![]() Age: 31 Gender: Male Posts: 2543 ![]() | Keep dancing... Entrancing... That part as amazing. the rest was okay, I think that it is a bit repetitive, and the rhyme scheme is different- but i like it. good job! ![]() |
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