Torturous Love

The leaves that fall from the tree
Resemble the tears, falling off her face
Slowly the leaves reach the ground
Alone in the autumn sun

For every tear she's shed
She gains another day
Of the torture she endures

The rain falling from the clouds
Resemble the tears, falling off his face
Slowly the rain hits the ground
Another puddle in the street

For every tear he's shed
He gains another day
Of a life without Love
Alone, dying

As she sheds no more tears
She sees another light
Something other than torture,
It's love

As he sheds no more tears
He sees no more light
Only seeing a life without love,
He panics, and runs

Running and running
He won't stop running
Until he finds love

Finally stopping,
Finally breathing,
He walks quickly
Wanting love

She finds it,
Reaches it,
She has found her love
But with only disappointment

She knew him well
Inside and out
This was the boy
That started her torture

This was the boy
That would never find love
All because of one mistake
For pushing and shoving,
That girl away

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I wrote it last night. I like it. Whatchoo think?

Constructive Criticism please.

Beautiful... Absolutely beautiful...

Thankoo.