sailor spaikae!
Jackass
Age: 31
Gender: Female
Posts: 1047
  | January 13th, 2007 at 10:13pm
Midnight madness, mercury moonlight
Inspiring the children forgotten by their peers
Spirals of glitter, illuminating indigo canopies
Souls catch alight at the sound of one voice
A magician hides among the rebellion.
Imagination flares up as the melodies begin
Vocals of the generations saviour
Time ceases to pass in this nightime epiphany
Hearts captured in his delicacy,
Mister Magic strikes again
A hero, an idol and so much more
Hypnosis amongst the masses, screaming for more
Captivating the followers, looking for a light
Charm oozes softly from an angels voice
The wizard of hearts conjures perfection.
Spell binding, infatuating, webs of diamonds
His craft, oh so intricate
Saving the souls collapsed at his feet
Unifying the outcasts in dire need
Fuelling the hope in a mystical dance.
Sir, won't you be my magic man?
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Peter Petrelli
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 35
Gender: Female
Posts: 4161 | January 14th, 2007 at 08:41am Wow, I was just amazed by your use of imagery. 
'Midnight madness, mercury moonlight
Inspiring the children forgotten by their peers
Spirals of glitter, illuminating indigo canopies
Souls catch alight at the sound of one voice
A magician hides among the rebellion.'
^Those lines were especially great. 
I don't really know what more I can say; I loved it, plain and simple. |
