Song: 'Cry, My Darling'

Hello, everyone! This is a song I just wrote and I'd like to know what you all think of it. The very beginning part and the very ending part are from the point of view of the person talking to their 'victim' per say. The rest of the song is the 'victim' talking. This is the kind of stuff that I've been feeling like for the past day or so, so yes. Excuse the amount of emotion and depression in the lyrics. Thanks in advance!
-Ghostie <3

'Cry, My Darling'

Delicate, fragile, depressed being.
Such a worthless little thing.
All alone once again,
No one wants to be your friend.
Abandoned out in the cold,
Don’t think for yourself,
Do what you’re told.

Life closes in around
Like the coffin that
We’re bound

From the cradle to the grave,
Again and again.
Shaving away at my feelings,
Shave, shave, shave!
Till there’s nothing left
But the skeleton of
What once was there.
Tear out my empty heart
And rip it to shreds.
It never got to love anyway.
Maybe soon I’ll be at peace.
In a coffin or out on the streets.

Life closes in around
Like the coffin that
We’re bound


You don’t understand.
You never will.
Till I’m laying beneath the land.
This sadness that I’m revealing
Is just annoying to you.
From when it’s written,
To when I sing.
Well, to me, you’re annoying too.

Cry, cry my darling.
Weep for me.
Die, die my darling,
And let me be.