C.j. Hardcore Pansy
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
Age: 35
Gender: Female
Posts: 97
 | February 9th, 2007 at 05:38pm A tragic event that leaves us wondering,
Is this the way it'll all end?
Promise me I'm not your world,
And I'll think about tomorrow.
Let's talk about the changing seasons,
Let's see where it takes us.
Maybe it'll end with your new affair,
Or the dried blood under my nails.
Black skies and red tears,
You're drowning me, love.
The wind has blown away our secrets,
What's left of us now?
We're life less creatures prowlling the night,
Looking to kill another dream.
What's wrong with this relationship?
Two of us, but neither love nor trust.
Witth all these things I've done,
I can't help but smile to the clouds above.
Through black mirrors I'd see you,
With bleeding roses, just for me.
A crooked smile across your face,
The sunset has ended, the moon shines bright,
I'm carrying around a mended heart,
Stitched together painfully.
Rose thorns shred my fingers,
Looking through black mirrors.
The sunset has ended and it ended with you,
You're drowning me, love. |
JustMe!
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
Age: 31
Gender: Female
Posts: 17 | February 10th, 2007 at 10:56am that was so good
that was amazing
that was wonderful
wow.
<33 |
jedi ninja
Idiot
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 910 | February 10th, 2007 at 06:31pm that was really really good |
C.j. Hardcore Pansy
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
Age: 35
Gender: Female
Posts: 97
| February 13th, 2007 at 04:39pm Thanks! i worked uber hard on this one! XD |
Tyler Durden
Jackass
Age: -
Gender: Male
Posts: 1454
 | February 13th, 2007 at 05:10pm that's really good.
i like the way you worded it.sometimes it can be too wordy or not wordy enough. this one is just the right amount. if you have anymore please post it. i would love to see them.  |
C.j. Hardcore Pansy
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
Age: 35
Gender: Female
Posts: 97
| February 15th, 2007 at 03:39pm Wow...thanks! Um...I'll post one later today...mmk? XD |
