Values of life

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Milk King For A Couple Of Days Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 3741	February 17th, 2007 at 03:48am Values of Life Love and pursuit of Wisdom By Intellectual Means and Self-Discipline We search for knowledge And enjoy the passion Of our own means Our philosophy Silence, fatigue on loneliness Searching for the answers Regrets of our decisions Yet we continue to search With who do we reside? Our hollows, our lives When god awakes we find We are just a shallow lie.
wait_what Geek Age: 38 Gender: Female Posts: 411	February 18th, 2007 at 06:22pm That last line is pure amazingness. I really loved this poem, but I'm not too keen on the opening stanza. It just doesn't seem to convey a complete thought like the other 3 stanzas do. Other than that, I love it!
Milk King For A Couple Of Days Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 3741	February 19th, 2007 at 01:58am Thanks. I'm not too proud of the opening stanza, eighter. It was more of a thing to get me going when I write. Usually, when I do write, the last stanza is the best.
Peter Petrelli King For A Couple Of Days Age: 35 Gender: Female Posts: 4161	February 23rd, 2007 at 12:07pm I really liked this - a very straight forward approach to the topic, but very well written and accessible. The last stanza was a particular favourite of mine; it was like everything else was intended purely to cement that one ending line. Great job.

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