Ephemera
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Peter Petrelli King For A Couple Of Days ![]() Age: 35 Gender: Female Posts: 4161 | Songbird of Vienna, your lips give nothing but blissful ephemeron, whilst rooting long lasting affections beneath my soils. Your words; your delicious kisses bless me with the magic that my bruised heart so sorely craves. Every night since you touched the sickly second degree burns of my core; coating them in watery, amniotic bandages, I have been breeding anaemic affections in glass jars of viscous poetry in preparation of your arrival. The love letters that you posted underneath the door of a derelict habitat; I still keep in sealed boxes under my floorboards. There they are safe from the frostbite of high December, and guarded from the shortfalls of glowing July. You are my love for all seasons. Vanilla delight graces my voice box, as the tropical juices of your comforts drip onto my shirt sleeves. Ripened lemon smeared sensuously upon your collarbone. Luscious raspberry stains my fingertips. Bliss is evanescent; its repressed flames lick at the skyline episodically, but craft tangible affinity where its shadows still dare to linger. |
Misanthropist Post Whore ![]() Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 23279 | I really like your style of writing, it always seems to make the poem flow nicely [to me, at least] and makes me want to keep reading. The whole thing was awesome, but my favorite stanzas were probably the second and third. Oh, and this line? Bliss is evanescent; its repressed flames lick at the skyline episodically, but craft tangible affinity where its shadows still dare to linger. love. |
wait_what Geek ![]() Age: 38 Gender: Female Posts: 411 ![]() ![]() | You make me so jealous. The opening was absolutely brilliant and lovely. Your vocabulary is kind of quaint in this poem, but adds such an elegant flare to it. The third stanza is my favorite. The last line of the second stanza to the first line of the third stanza is so awesome: I have been breeding anaemic affections in glass/ jars of viscous poetry in preparation of your arrival. Amazing. |
Peter Petrelli King For A Couple Of Days ![]() Age: 35 Gender: Female Posts: 4161 | Thank you so much guys. ![]() |
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