newagecarny
Was Here Two Weeks Ago
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 42495
 | March 2nd, 2007 at 01:58pm I'm an animal reincarnated.
Your hostile lovebites
block out livid bruises.
This punishment material
practiced on liquid plastic
is my Mauna Loa -
my revolting throat explosion.
I am glamour cremated.
Flashes to ashes,
Combust to dust.
All emotion amputated
Quod me nutrit, me destruit.
* Mauna Loa - the biggest volcano in the world.
Note: you probably won't understand half of this, and I can see why not. I couldn't fight all the metaphores that were coming to me. I missed writing.
Comments appreciated. |
rollerpig
GSBitch
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 62283 | March 2nd, 2007 at 02:12pm uh I actually really like it. a lot. it reminds me of a book I've read.
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...I don't really get the last sentence -lame-  ... it means 'what feeds me, destroys me' ... right?! |
Faith
Addict
Age: 39
Gender: Female
Posts: 11507 | March 2nd, 2007 at 02:13pm Ellaisonfire:All emotion amputated
I love that.  |
PaNcAkEs
Jackass
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 1808
 | March 2nd, 2007 at 02:13pm i love it, i totaly love it. |
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 2921
| March 2nd, 2007 at 03:18pm I always love your language to death. 
Beautiful wording. |
Peter Petrelli
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 35
Gender: Female
Posts: 4161 | March 3rd, 2007 at 06:48am I think I've got a vague, swirling idea of what you were trying to capture, and I personally thought the ambiguity worked amazingly well... I loved the Mauna Loa imagery especially. |
tomamazon
GSBitch
Age: 29
Gender: Female
Posts: 68084
| March 5th, 2007 at 12:04pm Ellaisonfire:I'm an animal reincarnated.
Your hostile lovebites
block out livid bruises.
This punishment material
practiced on liquid plastic
is my Mauna Loa -
my revolting throat explosion.
I am glamour cremated.
Flashes to ashes,
Combust to dust.
All emotion amputated
Quod me nutrit, me destruit.
* Mauna Loa - the biggest volcano in the world.
Note: you probably won't understand half of this, and I can see why not. I couldn't fight all the metaphores that were coming to me. I missed writing.
Comments appreciated.
Amazing.
Amazing last line as well <3 |
spill_no_sick
Falling In Love With The Board
Age: 31
Gender: -
Posts: 8588 | March 6th, 2007 at 09:05pm and this is why you're my favorite internet poet
I can't disect it more now, but damn I love your stuff so much
all I really needed help on was the latin
but you're amazing
keep writing
never give it up
or I kill things
'kay? |
