C.j. Hardcore Pansy
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 | March 19th, 2007 at 08:00pm Rose thorns and blood make a perfect match when
The tables have turned and we're against you
Singing a sweet melody of destruction
While innocent bystanders shatter at the thought
A rotting stench that made me sober
Bodies strewn across the floor
Grasping life till it has run dry
Days have become nights of vacant rememberance (sp?)
Through the shadows of the Council that
Sits upon their broken pedestal
Quenching the taste for unruely violence
Turning the clocks back to twelve
A minute seems longer when you've swallowed your tounge
They're making a fool out of you
Trampling down those who cross our path
Heartless, but prevailing, monsters
We seek out the ruined souls
And stand, confidently, to the Council
Embracing ourselves beyond what the eye can see
Mercisly we'll fight for you
Until our blood leaks out of every pore
A scream, piercing our ears rings out
The Council had decided
An almost too gruesome consequence
But stand proudly for today's your last
Stand proudly before the Council |
PONED
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Posts: 257 | March 19th, 2007 at 08:41pm hmm.. i dont know how to describe this....
IT WAS F****** AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! great job! |
C.j. Hardcore Pansy
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
Age: 35
Gender: Female
Posts: 97
| March 20th, 2007 at 03:22pm hehe....wow...thank u bery much love |
SurVi.vali.SM
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Posts: 572 | March 20th, 2007 at 03:47pm Very nice.
I especially liked the first two stanzas |
C.j. Hardcore Pansy
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
Age: 35
Gender: Female
Posts: 97
| March 20th, 2007 at 03:53pm XD Thanks! |
ros;
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
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Gender: Female
Posts: 32 | March 21st, 2007 at 11:15am Your imagery's really something. I like that you tell a story with this one. Good job. |
C.j. Hardcore Pansy
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
Age: 35
Gender: Female
Posts: 97
| March 22nd, 2007 at 06:21pm XD THANKS!!!!!!! Cool...I have Imagrey |
PaNcAkEs
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Gender: Female
Posts: 1808
 | March 22nd, 2007 at 07:51pm great imagery, wonderfully written *pats on shoulder* |
C.j. Hardcore Pansy
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
Age: 35
Gender: Female
Posts: 97
| March 26th, 2007 at 03:57pm XD Thank you love |
