PaNcAkEs
Jackass
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 1808
 | April 13th, 2007 at 04:22pm its just a story of a friend o' mine
he passed away whilst hitting the bottle
i helped him up and dragged him to my home
but the thing is, he still hasn't woken up yet
and its the third day and counting
i fear i've lost one of true meaning...
but its still not enough
he got up just to hit the bottle
and its still not enough
he had to run out to get some more
though its still not enough
i cant undo the damage done
cause its still not enough
all i can do is watch...
its just a crazy memory
i cant regret anything i've done
but watching him kill himself
that is what's suffocating me
suffocating us both
but its still not enough
he got up just to hit the bottle
and its still not enough
he had to run out to get some more
though its still not enough
i cant undo the damage done
cause its still not enough
all i can do is watch...
its a lonely broken bench
i carved his name into it the day before
i knew he was doing drugs in my bathroom
but i just thought he'd know better
know better not to drag me down too
but its still not enough
he got up just to hit the bottle
and its still not enough
he had to run out to get some more
though its still not enough
i cant undo the damage done
cause its still not enough
all i can do is watch...
Its whats keeping us both locked in embrace
i carved his name onto my dinner table
he dragged me down on a trip to heaven
which called out like an excursion to hell
he named the hour blacker than the raven
and promised he'd never tell,
but it wasnt what i wanted to hear...
but its still not enough
he got up just to hit the bottle
and its still not enough
he had to run out to get some more
though its still not enough
i cant undo the damage done
cause its still not enough
all i can do is watch... |
PONED
Geek
Age: -
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Posts: 257 | April 13th, 2007 at 09:51pm that was amazing!!!!!!!! |
PaNcAkEs
Jackass
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 1808
| April 14th, 2007 at 03:51am yay, a comment!  *hugs* thank you |
Inari
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 37
Gender: Female
Posts: 2538 | April 14th, 2007 at 01:30pm There are a few really golden lines in there that are unbelievably original and mind-blowing. |
PaNcAkEs
Jackass
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 1808
| April 14th, 2007 at 04:16pm you just made my day, Inari |
