robotchicken.
Falling In Love With The Board
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 | April 9th, 2007 at 07:12pm A metaphorical hole called depression being filled with liquid crystal
The water so evilly named anxiety strangles me
My thirsty lungs have been quenched with burning victory
A redemption song set to repitition sweetly caresses my bleeding ears
Eyes blood shot and flaming almost direct windows to my inner self
A helpful hand lent to me in the ever lighted form of you
Love so closely felt to me yet it stands cold and alone in your eyes |
SugarGreen
King For A Couple Of Days
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Posts: 3369 | April 9th, 2007 at 07:15pm Beautiful  just beautiful |
C.j. Hardcore Pansy
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
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| April 11th, 2007 at 08:58pm i love it....very beautiful....great imagery! |
Ex.Of.A.Freak.-TCD
Falling In Love With The Board
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 | April 11th, 2007 at 09:31pm Absolutely beautiful.
Amazing imagery. I especially love the last line.
You, my dear, have talent. I envy you. |
Destination_Unknown
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Posts: 105 | April 12th, 2007 at 10:03am oh wow,... I like it alot!
Very good! |
robotchicken.
Falling In Love With The Board
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| April 13th, 2007 at 12:14am Thank you all for your wonderful comments :] |
Peter Petrelli
King For A Couple Of Days
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Posts: 4161 | April 13th, 2007 at 06:11am I really like this, it's just a very simple piece of writing that conveys so much without being too dressed up, which I think makes it that much more effective. Good work. |
PONED
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Posts: 257 | April 14th, 2007 at 04:23pm wow. i liked it a lot!! |
