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Jesse Lacey Post Whore Age: 31 Gender: Female Posts: 23946	April 13th, 2007 at 08:22pm It's been long, too long. We've gone without speaking. I'm tired of the drama and heartbreak you bring. I bite my lip and stay far away. Holding back the tears and ignoring the stares. They say you're different, change is good. But I'm not willing to find out for myself. I've heard you're secure with yourself, no longer weak. You've finally got a voice and your not afraid. I heard I'll come back, "no doubt about it." But this time it's just different. The memories I visit and the times I remember. Oh, it's hard to forget the way you starred me down. You made me feel terrible, I am a disease? You told me to chill, live with ease. But how could I when you changed my life? They say you're different, change is good. But I'm not willing to find out for myself. I've heard you're secure with yourself, no longer weak. You've finally got a voice and your not afraid. I heard I'll come back, "no doubt about it." But this time it's just different. No longer sheltered by the image I had, I find myself searching and digging deep. You've brought out the worst in me, ruined my life. Then you said I needed to be more like you. Really cruel and crushing too? They say you're different, change is good. But I'm not willing to find out for myself. I've heard you're secure with yourself, no longer weak. You've finally got a voice and your not afraid. I heard I'll come back, "no doubt about it." But this time it's just different. I'm sick of the lies, and I'm finished with you. Nothing you say will change my mind. Don't glance at me, don't you dare apoligize. It's over, hun, I've won this fight.
SugarGreen King For A Couple Of Days Age: - Gender: Female Posts: 3369	April 13th, 2007 at 08:27pm I like! Especially this part because it resembles me so much. "No longer sheltered by the image I had, I find myself searching and digging deep. You've brought out the worst in me, ruined my life. Then you said I needed to be more like you. Really cruel and crushing too?"
Jesse Lacey Post Whore Age: 31 Gender: Female Posts: 23946	April 13th, 2007 at 08:30pm Thanks. I thought people would hate it. :\
PONED Geek Age: - Gender: Female Posts: 257	April 13th, 2007 at 10:16pm that was really good!
Jesse Lacey Post Whore Age: 31 Gender: Female Posts: 23946	April 14th, 2007 at 11:53pm Aww Sugar: that was really good! thank you so much! :] Any suggestions on bettering it?
Ex.Of.A.Freak.-TCD Falling In Love With The Board Age: 87 Gender: Female Posts: 5844	April 15th, 2007 at 10:21am You've officially brought me to tears. No lie. This relates to me so much.. I love it hun. I really do. The memories I visit and the times I remember. Oh, it's hard to forget the way you starred me down. You made me feel terrible, I am a disease? That part... those last few words... It got me.
Jesse Lacey Post Whore Age: 31 Gender: Female Posts: 23946	April 15th, 2007 at 01:34pm Dancing.Underwear.: You've officially brought me to tears. No lie. This relates to me so much.. I love it hun. I really do. The memories I visit and the times I remember. Oh, it's hard to forget the way you starred me down. You made me feel terrible, I am a disease? That part... those last few words... It got me. rly? Thank you. Sorry for making you cry.
PONED Geek Age: - Gender: Female Posts: 257	April 15th, 2007 at 02:12pm TAKiNGBACKSUNDAY.: Aww Sugar: that was really good! thank you so much! :] Any suggestions on bettering it? no way! you don't have to change anything. it is perfect please keep writing too!!!!!!!-
Jesse Lacey Post Whore Age: 31 Gender: Female Posts: 23946	April 15th, 2007 at 02:25pm Aww Sugar: TAKiNGBACKSUNDAY.: Aww Sugar: that was really good! thank you so much! :] Any suggestions on bettering it? no way! you don't have to change anything. it is perfect please keep writing too!!!!!!!- Thank you very much.

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