You gave me hope

You gave me hope
a beam of light through the smoke
the words that you said were mine
to keep in my heart
till it fell apart
and I got to know over time
you did nothing but rhyme
the voices in my head
are already dead
I killed them you see
and I admit it with glee
I remember you as you were
but none of that matters now
and I don't care how
I've overcome

ehh, it was okay. you could've structured it a little different, but other than that it was okay