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  | April 19th, 2007 at 03:49pm Biased fallacies grow in full blown
during the deadliest of all months.
Crazy old women swarm the district-
desperately trying to gain a new perspective
on an age-old world.
Ancient knowledge means
nothing to a clan of intangible hope.
No one will ever speak the truth-
They covet ignorance.
They crave embodiments of generalizations.
She has- never had- an inkling
of serpentine thoughts and charlatan eyes.
Never deciduous- never bothersome.
Always hatred had possessed the
wonderment of a thrill;
a deathly peace offering to a lifetime
of creed and greed.
He could never quite grasp
the ingenious of intellect.
It escaped him like a gust of air. It
laid bare a new
world filled with mysterious glorifications. |
SugarGreen
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Posts: 3369 | April 19th, 2007 at 05:41pm I think some explanation would be helpful on this one... I have tried to decipher it but I have not prevailed... |
PONED
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Posts: 257 | April 19th, 2007 at 06:21pm this could be expressed with just a little bit more feeling. other than that, it was amazing! |
Ex.Of.A.Freak.-TCD
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| April 19th, 2007 at 06:39pm I agree. Could have had a little more feeling. It was partially blank. But I liked it!
She has- never had- an inkling
of serpentine thoughts and charlatan eyes.
Never deciduous- never bothersome.
Always hatred had possessed the
wonderment of a thrill;
a deathly peace offering to a lifetime
of creed and greed.
That made me smile. =]
Though the "creed and greed" sorta interrupted the flow of that verse.
Other than that, good job!  |
wait_what
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| April 19th, 2007 at 08:52pm Eternity Ragnarok:I think some explanation would be helpful on this one... I have tried to decipher it but I have not prevailed...
You want me to tell you what it means? |
Inari
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Posts: 2538 | April 20th, 2007 at 07:50am This was beautiful. So beautiful. |
The Doctor
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| April 20th, 2007 at 10:28am She has- never had- an inkling
of serpentine thoughts and charlatan eyes.
Never deciduous- never bothersome.
Always hatred had possessed the
wonderment of a thrill;
a deathly peace offering to a lifetime
of creed and greed.
Awesome imagery....awesome words.
Your word choice has me lost for words.
They covet ignorance.
They crave embodiments of generalizations.
Those two lines = The Sole One Truth of Humanity. |
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| April 21st, 2007 at 08:44pm Thanks guys.  |
