FOF(Friend or Foe)

So much I’d love to say,
Not that you’d listen anyway,
Another great idea on your behalf,
Yet nobody else gets an opinion.

You’re an enemy id love to kill yet a friend I’d like to keep
You ask me what happened and I’d like to have an answer,
But why should I answer?
You tell me.

You always have a story to tell.
They’re maybe not true
But you like the attention it’s getting you.
Ever think of the hurt you may cause?
You don’t even think, you don’t even pause before letting out all the hurt that you cause.

comments would be greatly appreciated

that was pretty good!

victim of love:

So much I’d love to say,
Not that you’d listen anyway,
Another great idea on your behalf,
Yet nobody else gets an opinion.

You’re an enemy id love to kill yet a friend I’d like to keep
You ask me what happened and I’d like to have an answer,
But why should I answer?
You tell me.

You always have a story to tell.
They’re maybe not true
But you like the attention it’s getting you.
Ever think of the hurt you may cause?
You don’t even think, you don’t even pause before letting out all the hurt that you cause.

comments would be greatly appreciated

You always have a story to tell.
They’re maybe not true
But you like the attention it’s getting you.
You don’t even think, you don’t even pause
before letting out all the hurt that you cause.

I think it flows a little better by taking the one sentance out.

YAY! aw thanking Yhoooooooo! thanx i think ill change it 2 that