A soldiers Plea
| Author | Message |
|---|---|
| missand Geek  Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 102  | We’re standing on a hillside Watching the smoke and fire clear We really hope that no one’s died That’s our biggest fear We don’t want to have to go to Iraq No one should have to fight! We all knew people who hasn’t came back People back home saying, its alright. No one hears the bombs drop And the shrapnel explode You’re mind is at a loss When your out here on your own. Please send us home we hate being out here on our own. We just want to go home We’ve lived the last few months in fear Living in dirt and in sand No body back home, sees our tears Please let us leave this land. Not all of us are going to go home Some of us still will be here Others still left on their own Living their time in fear. When that order comes through We all loose faith in god No body knows what to do So much for people with love Please send us home we hate being out here on our own. We just want to go home Please send us home we hate being out here on our own. We just want to go home ( This was written for a close friend of the family who was killed this year in Iraq) |
| PONED Geek  Age: - Gender: Female Posts: 257 | Great job! I liked the rhyme pattern. it was very good! Keep Writing!!!!!!!! |
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