Wallflower

So, I apologize in advance for any lack of rhythm or just bad rhythm or something, because I actually wrote it to music so it just doesn't sound the same when you read it plainly. It kind of sounds like a Death Cab song if you could hear it though, to give you a bit of an idea... Comment, please!!



I wanna be your wallflower
I wanna sit next to you when you're sad
I wanna be the mountain top
The holds you up-
When your face is covered in clouds
I'm gonna be the spring like all the flowers in
the ground-
Raindrops as they are fallin' down
to cradle your whole face
and all your mistakes
for me.

'Cuz every flower blooms for a reason
and every blade gets crushed by your hand
But all the troubles with the insects-
Buzzing 'round your head
They're not your plan today
So don't think-
Don't even think they'll stay.

I wanna be your wallflower
I wanna hold my place on your wall
eyes locked
and fingers laced
with the cob webs
and old fingurines
I wanna step up to my domain
I wanna be your shelter from the rain
The one who eases your pain...
tonight.
The one who eases your pain...
who makes you sane tonight.

Anything....?

this was really good. it flowed really nicely.
Great job!

Thank you!