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PaNcAkEs
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PaNcAkEs
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April 27th, 2007 at 02:04pm
Hold onto what you've got,
even if it's a broken heart.
'Cause if you let go,
all you get is torn apart.

I'm so bare,
naked in front of you.
It's only a layer of skin
Hiding whats inside.

Hold onto what you've got,
you can always make it better.
But dont let it get out of hand,
it closes up before it opens.

I'm so bare,
naked in front of you.
It's only a layer of skin,
hiding whats inside.

My thoughts and feelings,
They hide.
I dont bottle them up like you,
though you're still so open...

I wish you'd let me in...
I wish you'd let me in...
I wish you'd let me in...

Hold onto what you've got,
face your fears and enjoy.
But don't get carried away,
I know when to stop trying.

I'm so bare,
naked in front of you.
Its only a layer of skin,
hiding whats inside.
I'm so bare,
stripped to the bone.
It was only a matter of time
Before i became see-through.

My thoughts and feelings,
they hide.
I dont bottle them up like you,
Though you're still so open.
Your heart is closed
and the door's locked twice.

I wish you'd let me in...
I wish you'd let me in...
I wish you'd let me in...

Please don't deny,
Please don't deny,
Please don't deny,
Please don't deny that you're my friend.
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April 27th, 2007 at 07:09pm
it was amazing. it flowed very nicely.
you are a great writer!
PaNcAkEs
Jackass
PaNcAkEs
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 1808

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April 28th, 2007 at 02:31am
awwh, thank you so much.
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