lyrical_mess Falling In Love With The Board
 Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 5278
 | April 29th, 2007 at 05:14pm Festoon
Last city
I thought I could trust the repitition
The drifting I feel each morning and night
As with sleep came the sorrowful moans
Reminding me I wasn't home.
But instead emerged a new curiosity
Deeper than my imagination
Far above anything I'd ever planned.
My world fell together
A metaphor for the riverflow
With more grace than I could understand.
Ironically,
I still don't know the answer. |
PONED Geek
 Age: - Gender: Female Posts: 257 | April 29th, 2007 at 09:38pm i liked it. It was really good!! |
Peter Petrelli King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 35 Gender: Female Posts: 4161 | April 30th, 2007 at 04:34am I've re-read it over and over, because it really is an interesting piece of poetry. I feel so guilty that I haven't had time or inspiration to write something yet, but I'll have to think of something really beautiful to match this.  |