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April 28th, 2007 at 07:33pm
Take me away

Locked inside myself

I want to run away

but I can´t

I wish I could see the light...

I wish I could see the path...

Only you could can bring me back

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Take me by the hand

I´ll take a deep breath

Take me out of here

I won´t feel any pain...

Take me away...
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So Damn Bored
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April 28th, 2007 at 07:38pm
It was originally written in an old diary.. (from a long long LONG, time ago....) and it used to make some sense then ; but now, it doesn´t feel right at all,Dno so I´d like a little help to finish it or edit it in any way... Coffee
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April 28th, 2007 at 08:23pm
hm. i can't think of anything as an ending.....
Anyway, it is great how it is.
Nice job!!!!!!!!!
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April 28th, 2007 at 08:43pm
Thanks =P
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April 29th, 2007 at 12:38pm
I dig the last half, but the first half lacks a little rhythm. Overall good job, though. It'd make a good song in my opinion.
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April 30th, 2007 at 09:56pm
I´ll try to fix it... =P
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