Diptych Affinity

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ros;
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
ros;
Age: 36
Gender: Female
Posts: 32
May 1st, 2007 at 01:19pm
Long winding road. It's a never-ending journey
arm in arm with a kindred spirit.
Shared dreams and ambitions, wants and
aspirations. The light night breeze a
futile resistance against our friendship,
the feeble streetlight outshone by our bond.

Amid laughs and linked elbows, we know this

“We love each other but we're not in love.....
you understand that?”

Yes. I understand that.

Arm in arm with a kindred spirit,
down a long winding road.
Love in different measures.
PONED
Geek
PONED
Age: -
Gender: Female
Posts: 257
May 1st, 2007 at 08:28pm
*sigh* i didn't want this to end.
This was truly amazing!
I liked how it sorta flowed.
It was really descriptive and I like that.


Arm in arm with a kindred spirit,
down a long winding road.
Love in different measures

That part was...omg..i am speechless.
It was just great
Very Happy keep wirting!
ros;
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
ros;
Age: 36
Gender: Female
Posts: 32
May 2nd, 2007 at 11:49am
Thanks so much =]
Peter Petrelli
King For A Couple Of Days
Peter Petrelli
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 4161
May 2nd, 2007 at 02:52pm
Oh God, I absolutely love it.

'“We love each other but we're not in love.....
you understand that?”

That is just insanely beautiful, and I think it's great how you also managed to incorporate dialogue into it as well. Very Happy Beautiful. I keep re-reading it in an attempt to make criticism, but I can't.
ros;
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
ros;
Age: 36
Gender: Female
Posts: 32
May 3rd, 2007 at 10:15am
Ellen =] thank you.
Inari
King For A Couple Of Days
Inari
Age: 36
Gender: Female
Posts: 2538
May 5th, 2007 at 09:38am
You have such a beautiful way with words that I'm envious of.
ros;
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
ros;
Age: 36
Gender: Female
Posts: 32
May 6th, 2007 at 08:12am
Thanks =]
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