Black Rain

Slow down, too fast.
I don't wanna crash and burn.
Take a step back and relax
This isn't our turn.

I don't wanna break this star
Before it has chance to shine
Just let me hold on tightly
To what's just mine

Oh no, don't touch
You're doing way too much..
For love.

Chorus
This isn't love
It's just your fantasy
How can you say you love me?
It's the dullest flame
In this tricky game.
You don't wanna bust
Like a black balloon.
It'll be time for you to combust
Oh so soon.

Where's that steady heartbeat
That I got used to?
It's done and gone;
Too good to be true.

You broke what I had
And now I have nothing.
How can you say you care
About nothing but me!

Chorus
This isn't love
It's just your fantasy
How can you say you love me?
It's the dullest flame
In this tricky game.
You don't wanna bust
Like a black balloon.
It'll be time for you to combust
Oh so soon.

Black and grey
Why is this the weather?
I don't want to stay
With just you forever.

Lighten up, get back.
Stop whispering in my ear.
You just don't really know
How to show you care...

Slow down, too fast.
I don't wanna crash and burn.
Take a step back and relax

This isn't our turn.

i think its very good.
You have this special kind of...rhyming?
I didnt like the chorus too much though, but its still pretty good.
i liked the seventh verse the most, i really did.
You're good.