PONED
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Gender: Female
Posts: 257 | May 17th, 2007 at 11:12am She falls in a pit of despair
Mourning and weeping in the valley of tears
Her face is always wet from the tears or blood
She can't control herself
Locks herself in her room
Under the covers...where it is dark
Writing love notes to her love
And then throws them away
The days go by and she stays still in her room
Her friends try to help
Her family tries to help
She could care less
A year would go by and she's still be in bed
Wishing her love could be by her side
Finally comes out of the dark
She writes another love note
She brings it outside and walks to the cemetery
Where she could lay by her love
And put the love note by his grave
And sign it with a kiss.
"Love,
I'd love your kiss just one more time
I wish your kiss could kill me
So I won't have to go through this pain
Without you"
Her note she places down.
She bends down on her knees
Says a prayer and cries
Her love forever is goodbye. |
PaNcAkEs
Jackass
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 1808
 | May 18th, 2007 at 08:52am thats so sad. But nonetheless beautiful. Good work (y) *claps* |
Destination_Unknown
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Gender: Female
Posts: 105 | May 18th, 2007 at 04:16pm I love it, its so sad but very peaceful. Its underatandable and its very well sad! But i love it and its awsome!!! |
La Tua Cantante
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Age: 31
Gender: Female
Posts: 171
 | May 18th, 2007 at 04:35pm its very sad!
yuo use the word love a lot in it, but its very emotional,
it looks like a very hard mood to work with for some people, but for others a very hard one, .....anyway what im trying to get to is its a great mood that you chose!
great job! |
PONED
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Gender: Female
Posts: 257 | May 18th, 2007 at 10:19pm Thanks! |
