Gothic Princess

sorry if this sucks, i usually post my songs right after they're written, but i think it was a school day on march 14'th(..i add dates to my poetry...mom made me get used to that habbit) so no internet so i think i forgot lol, so here it is, sorry if its not really good, it has a little bit of my old poetry clinging to it lol...i just noticed that i write alot of songs lately...now if someone could help me with the music...it sucks when you play guitar but are unable to find the right music to your Own songs lol.

Emerald nightmare,
She called you out so answer her prayers.
She wished for a quick fix,
So give her what she wanted
- to forget.

She was pale, sickly pale.
Her skin blue to snow.
Most found her attractive.
Did she care? No...

Where did our sin run off to?
to What, to what did we force her into?
Sticks and stones may break our bones,
but with those we shoved her away.
Our gothic princess, Shower her with curses
just cause you didnt know better,
She had to suffer

Bracelets of thorns and ocre stones,
Necklaces with iron filings.
Magnetism at its finest...
Pull her close and dont let her run away.
You asked yourself the same question...

Where did our sin run off to?
to What, to what did we force her into?
Sticks and stones may break our bones
but with those we shoved her away
Our gothic princess, bury her under curses
just cause you didnt know better
She had to suffer

thats not bad at all good look at mine plz Smiley

yay, ok

Beautiful. OMG that was just beautiful. It does NOT suck.
It's kinda true...yeah
Great Job!!!!!!!!!!!

lol, i dont remember when i wrote this XD but thanks anyway

Beautiful, I love it....very cool