Tyler Durden
Jackass
Age: -
Gender: Male
Posts: 1454
 | May 20th, 2007 at 02:59pm *heartbeat in the opening, getting faster*
We're goin' up,
No looking back
we're already 80 feet up
not too far left,
no turning back
There's no better way to go.
Let's get our Adrenaline pumpin' up *heartbeat*
BREAKING POINT!!
Adreniline is running high
Can't hardly seem to breathe
Got nothing left to lose
-LET GO-
*scream*
Let's get our Adrenaline pumpin' up *heartbeat*
BREAKING POINT!!
Free fall for 80 feet
Dive into shark infested waters
Even reading a speech.
It doesn't take much to send your Adreniline....
-through the roof-
Let's get our Adrenaline pumpin' up *heartbeat*
BREAKING POINT!!
Let's get our Adrenaline pumpin' up *heartbeat*
BREAKING POINT!!
caps=emphasis or yelling.
* = extra sounds
- = regular speech.
this is a song and i weild Poetic licence. also, my spelling isn't that great. |
Kelly Khaos
Idiot
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 962
 | May 20th, 2007 at 07:53pm I like it. It's repetitive, which would probably sound catchy in a song.
I like the verse Free fall for 80 feet
Dive into shark infested waters
Even reading a speech.
It doesn't take much to send your Adreniline....
-through the roof-
Good work, Mindy. :] |
Tyler Durden
Jackass
Age: -
Gender: Male
Posts: 1454
| May 20th, 2007 at 08:31pm thanks Kelly. =]
i want it to sound repeatitive.
i quote Green Day,
The Billie: we want our songs to stick you know? people to get them stuck in their heads ya know? |
