PaNcAkEs
Jackass
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 1808
 | May 17th, 2007 at 02:02pm it might not be half as good as it should be although i hope it is.
White rice grains,
covering your pale face.
Its so syrreal,
hang onto this:
I'll say this just once,
so don't let go
of your dream
and the shadows...
I said go run,
hide from their sins,
fake if you must,
but don't let it get to your heart.
They'll burn if they must,
beneath the earth's crust...
Bottles and ashtrays,
littering the marble floor.
Its so addictive,
don't give in to this:
Plead once more.
I'll lock the doors,
seal the windows,
hide your soul...
I said go run,
hide from their sins,
fake if you must,
but don't let it get to your heart.
They'll burn if they must,
beneath the earth's crust...
I'll seal the windows, again.
Bury the keys as deep as I can.
Burned the letters they sent to you,
and hid away, facing those deep eyes,
shining bright, larger than life.
I found the truth where it lies...
I said go run,
hide from their sins,
fake if you must,
but don't let it get to your heart.
They'll burn like dieing stars,
revealing all their scars...
I said go run,
hide from their sins,
fake if you must,
but don't let it get to your heart.
They'll find another place,
we won't see them fall from grace... |
Destination_Unknown
Geek
Age: -
Gender: Female
Posts: 105 | May 18th, 2007 at 04:17pm I likeit alot, i think it shoudl become a song, if umeant it to be one. thats awsome... love it! =) |
PaNcAkEs
Jackass
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 1808
| May 20th, 2007 at 02:18pm i did, thanks  i will see to it done  |
PONED
Geek
Age: -
Gender: Female
Posts: 257 | May 20th, 2007 at 06:53pm Wow.
This is another amazing work of art by you. You never dissapoint me
Great Job, Love!!!!!!!!! |
PaNcAkEs
Jackass
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 1808
| May 22nd, 2007 at 06:33am its so wonderful hearing you say that, it means alot to me. Thanks! |
