PaNcAkEs
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Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 1808
 | May 20th, 2007 at 03:59pm Seven coctail glasses
at half past two
decorate the near-empty tables...
Raindrops glimmering
the rain washed away...
Empty dance halls,
once crowded from top to bottom...
Everybody loves a good dance.
The orchestra is jaded,
too many rounds persuaded...
Black and white dots,
striped and squares,
adorned the dresses and skirts,
as gals turned to grandmothers
before our very eyes.
Milkshake and burger stalls,
ice cream and cotton candy,
local drive in's...
The liscence plate got stolen,
and Laura's sniffing glue...
Andrew's mother was a hooker,
and Jade's dad a lawyer.
Both ended up in the gutters.
Got married in the slums,
and had two kids who never really grew up...
You're 16 and sitting in a pub,
looking 18 but can't get enough
of the extra dry martinys...
Glasses piling up,
and soon you're under the table...
The pianist is falling asleep on the job,
the drums are suffering from headache.
But you just have to sit there,
the only person in that old hall,
and even when you leave,
the music just keeps on playing... |
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Posts: 257 | May 20th, 2007 at 08:16pm ehmagawd! (sorry)
This is lovely. I love it. It is very jazzy. I felt like I was in some kind of club...thing
anyway,Great Job Love!!!!!  |
PaNcAkEs
Jackass
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 1808
| May 21st, 2007 at 02:14am yay ... try listening to that song "Autumn Leaves" thats what gave me the idea *winks* Once i remember who performed it, i can tell you. But thank you so much  *hugs* |
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Gender: Female
Posts: 257 | May 22nd, 2007 at 09:27pm lol
Okay yeah I'd like to know who performed it!
*hugs back* |
