Nightmares.xx Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
 Age: - Gender: Female Posts: 14
 | May 22nd, 2007 at 08:30pm Critisicim please... Pretty please?
Sleepless dreams,
and tears of anguish;
As I say my goodbyes,
screams will shatter the darkness.
There's a day for suits and ties,
a place for dirt and grime;
Our horrors from within,
Break hearts amongst the crime.
Dearly beloved you weren't listening,
as I told you of my sins;
Your eyes were surely glistening,
as we faltered and gave in.
Please place your finger on the trigger,
and take the barrel to my head;
You'll meet me here at half past one,
and together we'll be dead. |
PONED Geek
 Age: - Gender: Female Posts: 257 | May 22nd, 2007 at 09:51pm Criticizm?? Yeah right
This is amazing. I love it
Great Job  |