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 | May 22nd, 2007 at 07:07pm Basic Rhyming, Basic point, but its "basic"ly how i feel
Foolish to Love,
Foolish to Trust,
Foolish to give into my lust,
Foolish for believing all of his lies,
Foolish for letting him hear my cries,
Foolish for giving him a second chance,
Foolish for having that "one last dance",
Foolish for doing this again and again,
Even more foolish for being "Just friends"
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PONED
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Posts: 257 | May 22nd, 2007 at 08:21pm I like it.
Simple yet sweet.
Good Job!!!  |
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| May 22nd, 2007 at 09:27pm thank you  |
Destination_Unknown
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Posts: 105 | May 25th, 2007 at 07:28pm very simple and it gets to the point, i like it! its sweet too! good job |
