Weep? I'm Still Here For You.

I know it isn't really all that great, and the title basically sucks. But, please tell me what you think?

Weep? I'm Still Here For You.

Weep in this time of despair
As buildings and houses come crashing down
Rage will end in tragedy
With your pitch-black heart beating
Pounding with your eyes glaring
With flames so strong
Your letting your surroundings control you
But, maybe you like it that way?

Hurting the people that try to care
Even though you don’t really mean to
Falling; Desperately falling
Into this stat of mind
To where you cant find your way,
You can’t find who you are,
Or what you want to be?

All these signs blowing up in your face
Chances have gone and faded
The thunder roars deep inside your soul
You pass up everything good
And focus on the horrible things
How can you live this way?

You sit alone; There’s no one there
You look up at your blank sky for a reply
Any contact; That’s all you wish for?
You look down, just think:

[All the horrible words exchanged,
The evil looks you gave,
All the people you hurt in return,
All the people you pushed away,
And now you want to cry?]

The rains falling
The sky is crying with you
The thunder roars even loader
As your black heart pulses with blood once more
Your mind sets at a point of common sense
You finally see the big picture
Of what now you have made of your life.

Your time clock is stuck on the present
The time in the past is lost in your life
You can’t depart from it
Its there to stay
But, for the future
Its all up to you to decide.

Make it good?
Keep it this way?
Just go by the way you feel right now
It can’t go wrong.

Sleep; Just sleep now
Then you’ll know
Oh, you’ll know.

Just listen to what’s left and trying to escape from your heart
It can’t go wrong,
It just can’t.

After all of this,
I'm still here for you
And I'll weep along with you.

That's really good.
I like it.<3

I love it,
Great job

I think you have really good images in there, but you should work on your rhythm.