Benji_BlackMyEyes
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
Age: 33
Gender: Male
Posts: 18 | March 13th, 2007 at 02:35pm Crit Would Be Nice = )
Insomnia-
Verse 1-
I've Got That Song Stuck In My Head
And Im lying Here In Someone Else's Bed
And Im wondering Why I Can't Sleep
Yeah Im Wondering Why I Can't Sleep
Verse 2-
Outside Its Raining That Means Nothing To Me
The Moon Is Shinning But I Still Can't Sleep
And Everytime I Go To Shut My Eyes
Yeah Everytime I Go To Shut My Eyes
Chorus 1-
Your face comes and haunts me
Everytime I struggle to sleep
And the frustration takes me away
And puts me right in the middle of anxiety
Verse 3-
I feel her breathing next to me
And watch her as she sleeps
Thinking about all her dreams
Then close my eyes and try to sleep
Chorus 2-
Your face comes and haunts me
Everytime I struggle to sleep
And the frustration takes me away
And puts me right in the middle of anxiety
Bridge-
Just to break the silence I wanna scream
And wake her up from her dreams
And tell her I loved you
And that you loved me
Outro-
But maybe she's not the problem why I can't sleep
And that i have nightmares and not dreams.
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Benji_BlackMyEyes
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
Age: 33
Gender: Male
Posts: 18 | March 14th, 2007 at 04:51pm anyone at all???? |
C.j. Hardcore Pansy
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 97
 | April 12th, 2007 at 04:52pm wow....i liked it a lot......wish i knew how the beat goes. |
PONED
Geek
Age: -
Gender: Female
Posts: 257 | April 13th, 2007 at 10:18pm i liked it. it was really good! |
PaNcAkEs
Jackass
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 1808
 | June 1st, 2007 at 04:28pm i love it, i loved how you managed to make things rhyme without making it feel forced, write more. |
