Peter Petrelli
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 4161 | May 20th, 2007 at 05:37am In my adolescence I would welcome the summer like
Pagan ritual, and bare my pink-red shoulders to the
August heat. I liked the way the grass tickled my
colour tipped toes, with daisies dancing at my heels.
With my many lovers, I would share fried chicken and
rancid chips, with heavy rhythm bleeding through our
atmospheres. I would watch the rape fields sway to the
distortion, but now their poison has me coughing, caustic.
Ultraviolet intensity would flake my skin, and have me
sobbing with frustration. I like the way you watch
me smooth cold, protective lotion into my flesh; I like
the pretty sunhat you bought me for my last birthday.
With you I like to curl beneath the shade of the trees,
and offer crisp sandwiches soaked with flavour, coated
in piquant colour. Kiss me- angel- I love how the essence
of fresh bread and spicy scent fuses with your lips.
Picture perfect; on our picnic spot we filter through
aging negatives for disposal. Soft denim and chequered
dresses replace my sleazy skirts, but even through
metamorphosis, my taste in music hasn't changed much. |
The Doctor
Falling In Love With The Board
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 8786
  | May 21st, 2007 at 08:31am Ultraviolet intensity would flake my skin, and have me
sobbing with frustration. I like the way you watch
me smooth cold, protective lotion into my flesh; I like
the pretty sunhat you bought me for my last birthday.
Gorgeous and it's FREAKIN' great to see you back. 
It's just...damn cute and just the perfect-y summer scene with the memory of the past winter still lingering softly in the air. |
PONED
Geek
Age: -
Gender: Female
Posts: 257 | May 22nd, 2007 at 08:22pm I like it. Great Job!! |
Peter Petrelli
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 4161 | May 23rd, 2007 at 07:06am Thank you guys.  Thank you so much.  |
miau
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 31
Gender: Female
Posts: 4469 | May 24th, 2007 at 01:04pm You're still amazing. |
PaNcAkEs
Jackass
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 1808
| May 24th, 2007 at 02:05pm its brilliant, its always brilliant!
i personaly loved the fourth verse the most, but the whole of it is just fantastic!
I love your writing. |
indie kid
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 60 | May 29th, 2007 at 10:56am AMAZING |
wait_what
Geek
Age: 37
Gender: Female
Posts: 411
| May 29th, 2007 at 07:23pm Always good. Kind of different, though. It was happy and sad all at once... kind of.
It starts out really sweet, but then goes into kind of mad or upset or something, and kind of goes back and forth with that. It's good, it just threw me off a bit. |
Peter Petrelli
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 4161 | June 2nd, 2007 at 10:51am Thank you for your comments.
It wasn't supposed to be mad, or upset, just reminiscent, and showing how memories of your past can influence what you do later. |
