Benji_BlackMyEyes
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
Age: 33
Gender: Male
Posts: 18 | May 23rd, 2007 at 12:22pm This is for Australia......Enjoy
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"27 Minutes Or 1,620 Seconds...As Long As I Am With You"-
I would rather that you
Made my nose bleed
One hundred and ten times
Than me having
To watch you
From a far
And
I would rather forget
Every maths theorem
I have ever learned
Than to try
And remember
What color
Your eyes were
A collapsed lung
Than breathing
Without you
A bullet to the head
Than you never
In my mind
All this pain
I would go through
Just for 27 minutes
Again with you
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PONED
Geek
Age: -
Gender: Female
Posts: 257 | May 23rd, 2007 at 08:43pm aw! I love it. Great Job
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PaNcAkEs
Jackass
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 1808
 | June 1st, 2007 at 04:23pm i think its very good. *hands cookie* |
Peter Petrelli
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 4161 | June 2nd, 2007 at 10:53am I thought it was really interesting, and I liked how it was very measured, and precise in its language; I felt that it would say a lot about the speaker of the poem. |
