In the End

I’m waiting for a chance to show what I’ve got in my soul
Waiting for the few minutes I’ve earned to show my spark
Before the bell takes its final toll and leaves us in the dark
I’m in the business of gloom and doom
Pride’s got nothing to do with it

Looking out over my past and present
Makes me wish that some shit never happened
But I guess it all comes out in the end
Seeing people I loved and loathed
Makes me wish I’d taken better care of my soul
But I guess it all comes out in the end

I see the black eye and fat lip from my mistakes
Reminds me of the time when I never thought straight
I might regret a few short things, but nothing fatally drastic

Looking out over my past and present
Makes me wish that some shit never happened
But I guess it all comes out in the end
Seeing people I loved and loathed
Makes me wish I’d taken better care of my soul
But I guess it all comes out in the end

I’d like to think that I’ll be someone someday
Whether they believe it or not
If I’m the liberator or the one that’s hated for her efforts
I’ll hold my head high without a final thought

Looking out over my past and present
Makes me wish that some shit never happened
But I guess it all comes out in the end
Seeing people I loved and loathed
Makes me wish I’d taken better care of my soul
But I guess it all comes out in the end

Please wish me luck
Please wish me life
Don’t forget to remember me
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So, what do you guys think?

awesome!
i can definately see it being put to music, and i like the word usage.
good job.