Frost and Fire.
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The Doctor Falling In Love With The Board ![]() Age: 35 Gender: Female Posts: 8786 ![]() ![]() | Fresh, light air cascades around my airy head. Oh, I cannot breathe in enough of these new carbon monoxides. Retching corpse, the stench of life I reside in. Fire, capsulated in a glass vial for whatever vile purposes, extinguished in a strike of lightening. Electricity is gloriously soft on this human skin of mine. Let me drink this elixir of forgetfulness. How I want his touch again, the soft caress of his hazel twig hair. But he will not touch me again, he sees my shame. The hands black with sin. Cardinal blessings in a bundle of sackcloth. I dare not open it. The coldness of absolution. No bishop or nun can sweet-talk me into hanging. The fornicators in abstainful clothing. I listen to no God in his pearly Heaven. He dances with Lucifer, the hypocrite. His bastard son is no better. He can no longer ignore the red plush velvet scoring on his skin. Ash upon my head, a baptism of fire. Not the ashes of palm leaves but of a French heretic, in the shape of her heart. Oh how my heat astounds science. I am an inferno of angst and boredom. My vitriol tongue greases the wings of angels, singed to charcoal. Do not touch me, you are like ice and you will melt. Oh, burn with me, burn with me mortal. There is beauty in corruption. I worship one man, The Lord of Time. He lives in his dimensionally transcendent Heaven beyond tangibility. Only his soft words can cool this supernova in distress. |
Marie Antoinette Jackass ![]() Age: 30 Gender: Female Posts: 1170 ![]() | I loved it very good a great use of vocabulary and had detail making it easy to picture it keep up the good work!! |
Peter Petrelli King For A Couple Of Days ![]() Age: 35 Gender: Female Posts: 4161 | The reason I like this so much, is because it was inspired by Doctor Who, it means that there's going to be a little background behind it, and there will be a good few people who appreciate it as something different to conventional poetry, if that makes sense. I love your imagery. |
newagecarny Was Here Two Weeks Ago ![]() Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 42495 ![]() | Wow. I absolutely love this. I thought that by reading on i'd eventually get bored because it's so long but it got better and better with every word. Your selection of words is unbelievable. I would choose a favourite part but it's impossible. A fine piece of poetry indeed. Keep up the good work! |
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