Imaginary

Board index - Your poetry

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PONED Geek Age: - Gender: Female Posts: 257	May 28th, 2007 at 01:32pm Look around you Porceline Trees Paper flowers Grass made of stain glass Mountains nothing more than a painting on your wall The birds are oragami Made of blue constuction paper They fly only by the direction of the wind And their wings are not fit to soar The animals fur Made of the carpeting from your floor Their eyes are made of plastic The world around you is nothing more Than a vivid picture of your imagination All of this is Imaginary
Destination_Unknown Geek Age: - Gender: Female Posts: 105	May 28th, 2007 at 01:50pm WOAH!.. deep.. and yet. scary but very good!! i love it.. its just wel amazing!
PONED Geek Age: - Gender: Female Posts: 257	May 28th, 2007 at 01:53pm yay! Thank you!
Revenge;; Geek Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 270	May 28th, 2007 at 02:47pm I like it..=]..the title fits very well..XD..I think I saw this on INO too?..maybe?...XD..
indie kid Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie Age: - Gender: - Posts: 60	May 28th, 2007 at 04:43pm That's pretty amazing. Love the meaning and the way the words flow:]]x x x
PaNcAkEs Jackass Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 1808	May 29th, 2007 at 01:49am You've got quite a few spelling mistakes, first thing i noticed, but now to the poem itself,,,Its just amazing, you quite stunned me here Its very well written. I personaly loved the third verse the most... Keep writing, its wonderful material.
La Tua Cantante Geek Age: 31 Gender: Female Posts: 171	May 29th, 2007 at 05:03pm its very good! it gives you a great visual of what going on around, and the mood is very not plain, no definately not plain, not scary or happy, but more (grr) i cant find the word to describe it....um maybe like somewhere better then plain and very hesitational! ( i guess....thats the best way i can describe it, its so indescibeable and yet so good!) but yea its absolutely good! i would say this is one of your best poems! GREAT JOB!
PONED Geek Age: - Gender: Female Posts: 257	May 29th, 2007 at 09:26pm Pigment Stains: You've got quite a few spelling mistakes, first thing i noticed, but now to the poem itself,,,Its just amazing, you quite stunned me here Its very well written. I personaly loved the third verse the most... Keep writing, its wonderful material. Yeah exuse my bad spelling -_- Thank you! I must have gotten it from the talent you have me!! Imaginary Friend;: I like it..=]..the title fits very well..XD..I think I saw this on INO too?..maybe?...XD.. Yeahh I have an account on that too so I was like I'll put it on here too lol Thanks!!
PaNcAkEs Jackass Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 1808	June 2nd, 2007 at 03:34am grins naah, i think its your own talent here.
PONED Geek Age: - Gender: Female Posts: 257	June 10th, 2007 at 09:35pm why thank you!

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