Billie Joe is NOT MY SOULMATE!!!

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SugarGreen
King For A Couple Of Days
SugarGreen
Age: -
Gender: Female
Posts: 3369
April 16th, 2007 at 09:29pm
Eyes so brightly shine
as deep reflections into my soul
the intensity behind them
the swiftness of thought
is something I want to know
heading for a place
I've never known
my silent heartbeats race
all alone
The rain pours down
my head is in a spin
will it carry me away
or wash away the tears
My heart is an open flame
waiting to consume the pain
the rythms out there
pour into my brain
as I cry out in this simple prayer
the rain.
Sandwich-Masta
Geek
Sandwich-Masta
Age: 31
Gender: Female
Posts: 224
August 4th, 2007 at 04:45am
NO COMMENTS!? Seriously!?

Dude, this poem is awesome! It's just...sort of free-verse, but every now and then there's a rhyme. I like stuff like that.Very Happy

I just can't believe there aren't any comments...
newagecarny
Was Here Two Weeks Ago
newagecarny
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 42495

Mibba
August 4th, 2007 at 12:58pm
i apologize but i CANNOT be objective about this poem after seeing the title lmfao
lyrical_mess
Falling In Love With The Board
lyrical_mess
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 5278

Mibba Blog
August 4th, 2007 at 05:52pm
I was thinking the same thing...I mean, I know I wrote this totally stalker-ish poem about him but perhaps you should change the title.
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