Fascinated

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lyrical_mess Falling In Love With The Board Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 5278	August 7th, 2007 at 07:36pm What a strange fascination: Blue and translucent, Yellow and soft, And glowing... Yes it's glowing, shining, bursting Burning! Of course it's burning, fire burns. Fire burns pretty, it burns. I'm no pyromaniac. This is no psychotic love But fascination, simple fascination. And what a strange fascination to have! The interesting thing about this poem was that I was writing it chemistry class and in the first verse, I was about to write "blue and yellow" but stopped and though how familiar that phrase sounded. And I was like "oh! That song by The Used!" and it occurred to me that the song might be about fire, though I've never even heard it... yeah.
Dead End Girl Addict Age: 31 Gender: Female Posts: 10219	August 8th, 2007 at 08:58pm I think it's quite adorable. Great job on putting a spin on pyromaniacs.
lyrical_mess Falling In Love With The Board Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 5278	August 9th, 2007 at 03:53pm Thank you. And I repeat: I'm no pyromaniac.
The Doctor Falling In Love With The Board Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 8786	August 9th, 2007 at 07:00pm I loved the imagery of the yellow flame. It really owned. And what a strange fascination to have! I would have put: And such a strange fascination to have! But that's me wanting t sound totally pompous. Sooo, I love it (and your ava omg).
lyrical_mess Falling In Love With The Board Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 5278	August 10th, 2007 at 04:39pm Actually, you're right. "such" does sound better.

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