Shotgun

This song/poem is about Dick Cheney and the incompetency of current governmental leaders. A common topic, I know, but I like it.

If you want to hear it put to music, visit www.myspace.com/leensrockinband

Hey old man, you know you look so sad.
Is there something bothering you?
Maybe that awful truth you've been avoiding
is finally sinking through.

But probably not, just a wishful thought
the cynicism let slip through.
With all this war, you should adopt
some wishful thinking too.

(Pre-Chorus)
carry on without a reason.
Blame it all on condoleezza.

(Chorus)
When life gets you down, don't wear a frown.
There's only one man that's bigger.
When life gets you down, don't wear a frown.
Just close your eyes and pull the trigger.

Tell me what you think about the situation.
Do you care? Or are you just
counting down till your next big vacation
to leave us in the dust.

After all, we're just tiny little insects.
You're a big important man.
Let's see what you do when you're put in the middle.
Our blood is on your hands.

(Pre-Chorus)
(Chorus)

Thankyou very much. Death and blood just ain't my thang, yo.

That's how you spell Condoleezza? I always wondered. B)

I liked it and it's good, but for me, maybe only for me, too direct. You could've written it like, a story about some family or stuff ... And put in how Dick makes mistakes or stuff.
Only my opinion.

I think I agree with Disco Superfly, but I did think that it was brilliantly written, and the flow was almost perfect. Good job, it was pretty good.