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King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 30
Gender: Female
Posts: 3363
 | August 17th, 2007 at 08:19pm The slashes on my wrist,
The blood all around me.
Stains in my jeans.
A little piece of paper,
Is sitting on my lap,
A carefully worded apology.
I'm distgusted with this place,
It seems as if everyone around me is leaving.
First the pain,
Now this.
I can feel blood in my hair,
I wonder how long I'll be here.
I'm scared,
I don't want this anymore,
I reach for the phone,
Dial 9-1-1.
By the time they arrive,
I had already gone,
Where to no one will ever know.
All they had to say was,
"Now this." |
Awkward.
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
Age: 30
Gender: Female
Posts: 10 | August 17th, 2007 at 08:23pm Damn woman.
This is not happy !!
You made some grammar mistakes
and this theme is common
But beside that , this is really good. |
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King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 30
Gender: Female
Posts: 3363
| August 17th, 2007 at 08:30pm Yeah I know it's common
But last night I was bored and it was the only thing I could think of |
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King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 30
Gender: Female
Posts: 3363
| August 25th, 2007 at 11:35pm Any one else? |
