SHARE YOUR SONGS!

Okay, I have a bunch of songs I've written and I know there must be others like me. So I made this topic. So post your songs and you reviews of mine and other people's songs. Rock On Everyone!.

My first song that I'll post

Title: Falling

[CHORUS]



I’ve found my self falling

Falling over you

But I know that you don’t

The feel the way I do



I saw you standing there

But I feel torn apart

Because I know you have him

And not me in your heart



[VERSE]

You told me, that, the other day

Your time with him was done

And you realize that it was me

Who was the only one.



To have your affections

And all your feelings too

And all I could think of them

Is how much that I want you



I woke up in a cold sweat

Tears roll down my face

That perfect time was all a dream

My life is a disgrace



[CHORUS]

I’ve found my self falling

Falling over you

But I know that you don’t

The feel the way I do



I saw you standing there

But I feel torn apart

Because I know you have him

And not me in your heart



[VERSE 2]



That day you told me

What I thought I’d hear

You and him had broke up

The time, I thought, grew near



I knew I had the chance

To start my life with you

Then what you say breaks my heart

You now like someone new.



You tell me how he acts

And the warmth of his embrace

And I try with all my might

To keep the tears from my face



[CHORUS]

I’ve found my self falling

Falling over you

But I know that you don’t

The feel the way I do



I saw you standing there

But I feel torn apart

Because I know you have him

And not me in your heart



[BRIDGE]



And I thought that maybe

You were the one for me

But now I know and now I see

That you would never let that be



[VERSE 3]



And now I feel that my feelings

Are starting to fade

And along with all the memories

You and I had made



You and I, we just may

Only live as friends

But now I’m you that’s not

How I want it to end



Maybe we could be together

If I have the guts to tell

But the though of losing you

Would be worse to me than Hell.



[CHORUS]

I’ve found my self falling

Falling over you

But I know that you don’t

The feel the way I do



I saw you standing there

But I feel torn apart

Because I know you have him

And not me in your heart



[FINAL VERSE]



If I just told you how I felt

Maybe you will feel the same

But if you say no and walk away

I’ll only have me to blame



When I think I have the guts

When I think I have a chance

The thought of my life without you

Will change the circumstance.



All our lives are reflections of

Choices that we've made

I just hope my choices with you

Will not let my life fade.

Title: Battlefield

Verse: Can’t you see,
What you’ve done to me?
I feel the pain,
But it’s just my disdain
For the world you see
It can not be,
And can’t you see,
What you’re doing to me!

Chorus: My mind’s a battlefield,
I can not escape.
I have no gun and I have no shield
The world’s began to shape.

The world is shaking under me,
I can’t seem to stand
Even though you can not see,
I am an American.

Verse 2: I made this world just for you
You’re the cast and I’m the crew
All my words just won’t do,
My world is turning blue.

Chorus: My mind’s a battlefield,
I can not escape.
I have no gun and I have no shield
The world’s began to shape.

The world is shaking under me,
I can’t seem to stand
Even though you can not see,
I am an American.

Interlude: You,
Can’t
See,
The
Pain
In
Me.

Help
Me
Set
My
Feel-
Ings
Free.

Help me now, help me right,
Help me and I’ll win this fight!

Chorus: My mind’s a battlefield,
I can not escape.
I have no gun and I have no shield
The world’s began to shape.

The world is shaking under me,
I can’t seem to stand
Even though you can not see,
I am an American.

Song Three

Title:Why Am I (Invisible)

[Verse 1]

I sit all alone
My mind has locked me in
Every time I think of you
The room begins to spin

You have an angle’s face
And long flowing hair
You seem to be perfect to me
But you don’t even see me there

[Chorus]

Whenever I see you
My stomach turns and bends
But now I’m starting to wonder
If we are even friends

You never look at me
Except the occasional stare
This really makes me wonder
Do you even see me there?

[Verse 2:]

We used to be good friends
We talked, we laughed and cried
And I felt a great sensation
When you were by my side

Then one day you seemed to change
You didn’t want me as your friend
You wouldn’t look, talk or smile at me
When did our friendship end?

[Chorus]

[Verse 3]

I have tried to talk to you
You listen without joys
When I’m done you don’t respond
You treat it as white noise

You don’t know how this feels
You don’t know how this seems
Cause now you won’t even notice me
Even in my dreams



[Chorus with altercation]

Whenever I see you
My stomach turns and bends
But now I’m starting to wonder
If we are even friends

You never look at me
Except the occasional stare
This really makes me wonder
Do you even see me there?

But now I hope one day
Even though I don’t know when
You will come and talk to me
And we’ll be friends again

Last SOng I'll post Today

Title: The Way I Feel

The day has come when I am ready to ask,
But the words have left my mind.
And I don’t know how to say it,
But I need you by my side.

Until I tell you how I feel
My whole life is a great, big mess
Although my feelings, they are strong
These words cannot express
The way I feel.

The way I feel about you
Is something only I can do
And these words, they just won’t do
They aren’t strong enough
To say how I feel….
About you.

I see boys asking girls
out, almost everyday
People think it’s easy
But there’s no love in what they say

“They’re just thoughts” is what I heard
But I know that is not true
If a picture’s worth a thousand words
There’d be 1000 ones for you.

The way I feel about you
Is something only I can do
And these words, they just won’t do
They aren’t strong enough
To say how I feel….
About you.

And what if today
Was the only day
That I could tell you
What I have to say?

The reason why I fear to say
The reason why I don’t hear your name
The reason why I don’t feel okay
Is because I fear that you don’t the same…
Way I do.

The way I feel about you
Is something only I can do
And these words, they just won’t do
They aren’t strong enough
To say how I feel….
About you.

The way I feel about you
Is something only I can do
And these words, they just won’t do
They aren’t strong enough
To say how I feel….
About you.

Hmmm. there pretty good.
My band is recodring on the 24th i'll put up a link here soon.
I do Guitar/Vocals.